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This is a very good drawing, but there are things that I would like to suggest [if you find something offensive please know that I'm no...


I really like this picture, and adore the eyes. I also love how you shaped the body so smoothly ^w^ The colors all are in about the sam...

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Happy place
She runs to her closet
She slams the door
Locked and solid
She can still hear them
The ugly sounds
She can always hear them
She will always hear them
She could run to the other end of the earth,
But she will always hear them
The fear will always call her name
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She speaks with caution
She guards her heart with warning
She moves in alert
She’s scared,
She’s scared of them leaving her
Leaving her so far behind, that she can’t get their attention
One already left, trampling on top of her as they left,
Not knowing of the scars it’s going to cause her
Not knowing of how much pain they will bring to her
Don’t Leave, her raspy voice calls
Don’t leave me to die here alone
I can’t be alone
I don’t want to be alone
Don’t
Leave
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Mask
I have a mask
It covers my shame
My secrets
My fear
My pride
My insecurities
I walk around
And see others with masks
Hiding their shame
Hiding their secrets
Hiding their fear
Hiding their pride
Hiding their insecurities
Hiding everything they do
Do you have a mask too?
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She runs to her closet
She slams the door
Locked and solid

She can still hear them
The ugly sounds
She can always hear them
She will always hear them

She could run to the other end of the earth,
But she will always hear them
The fear will always call her name
She speaks with caution
She guards her heart with warning
She moves in alert

She’s scared,
She’s scared of them leaving her
Leaving her so far behind, that she can’t get their attention
One already left, trampling on top of her as they left,
Not knowing of the scars it’s going to cause her
Not knowing of how much pain they will bring to her

Don’t Leave, her raspy voice calls
Don’t leave me to die here alone
I can’t be alone
I don’t want to be alone
Don’t
Leave
This is a very good drawing, but there are things that I would like to suggest [if you find something offensive please know that I'm not trying to be rude, but am trying to help you grow more as an artist :)]

First let's start on the face. The face shape is nice and bold, and is drawn very well. However, I wish you would have added more depth to the face, like shadowing, or adding thickness to the eyelashes, etc. to give it some more oomph.

Next, the hair. Try to see if you can make the hair flow more freely; outline not just the outside of the hair, but also some individual strands, to make it look more lifelike.

Finally, we come to the torso and hand. The proportions for this drawing are very well done ^^ The neck and shoulders look good, and everything lines up. The shirt looks good [try to add wrinkles or shading to the clothing too!] Yes, I do think you could have done better on the hands, but nobody's perfect at drawing hands [especially me (T_T ;)] and I think it's very good for trying your best.

Overall, this drawing is really cute, and I hope to see you grow more as an artist :)
hoped this helped a little
Just me [sketch]
so um

as you can see
I didn't really spend time on this either xD i feel like my whole gallery is me not trying but okay 
when i saved the file I forgot to hide the angle lines on mah face but I got too lazy to do anything about it so [AND YES I KNOW MY PROPORTIONS ARE OFF A LITTLE BIT]

enjoy my digital art shit 
I can't draw with digital media Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1]  I like paper and pencil better 
drawn with Painttoolsai that I don't deserve to have because I barely use it 
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hi :wave: thanks for the watch! :happybounce:
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you're welcome :) 
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Omg, thank you so much for a donation and kind words! ;-;
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you're welcome ^^
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