This is a very good drawing, but there are things that I would like to suggest [if you find something offensive please know that I'm not trying to be rude, but am trying to help you grow more as an artist
First let's start on the face. The face shape is nice and bold, and is drawn very well. However, I wish you would have added more depth to the face, like shadowing, or adding thickness to the eyelashes, etc. to give it some more oomph.
Next, the hair. Try to see if you can make the hair flow more freely; outline not just the outside of the hair, but also some individual strands, to make it look more lifelike.
Finally, we come to the torso and hand. The proportions for this drawing are very well done ^^ The neck and shoulders look good, and everything lines up. The shirt looks good [try to add wrinkles or shading to the clothing too!] Yes, I do think you could have done better on the hands, but nobody's perfect at drawing hands [especially me (T_T
] and I think it's very good for trying your best.
Overall, this drawing is really cute, and I hope to see you grow more as an artist
hoped this helped a little